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A Small Journey Into Love (Full Text)

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This is a small story about two people who fall in love. One is ready to live out his feelings, and the other one is a bit of a foolish coward who will take some time to realize that running away is futile.

It is inspired by my Muse – actor Tom Hiddleston – thus why his name and references to him appear in the story, but you can bypass those details and imagine someone else. As for the girl, I will be honest, it is 90% based upon the writer, myself. The 10% remaining being that I am not a professional photographer and I have absolutely no intention in meeting Tom. He inspired me things that no man managed to inspire me before, and I think it would have been a constant regret hadn’t I written this story down. What he does and speaks might not be 100% accurate to the man himself – please take into consideration that this is a FICTION and thus, as much as I tried to respect him in his way of being, I had to do a bit of creative interpretation and writing to bring the story in its current state of being.

I imagined the story like a short movie with sometimes just music and sounds, thoughts floating around, thus why you read it with space gaps – they represents, in my literal translation – bits of time which didn’t need superficial explanation. As for references, everything I mentioned is quoted at the end of the text.

Part 1 originally titled “A Night With the Most Wanted Man” [link] which is the PG edition and ends at the rooftop, [link] and [link] are the complete versions with the more adult themed content and are concluded in their way, putting an end to the first part of the journey.

Part 2 originally titled “Guess who” [link] which is the light PG version, [link] and [link] are the complete versions with the more adult themed content. Also note that the wattpad version (second link) does include Final chapter of the story without any sort of cut and the references.

Part 3 originally titled “The Last Chapter” [link]

You are Currently in The First part's full text – and this portion Does Contains mature content



Past notices worthy of importance :
Edit of October the 5th 2012 </strong> - Most Completely revamped the story - this is the final edition (as of now)

Edit of August 20th - 2012 - mostly reworked it - sprinkled some more plausibility into it and reworked some parts which were bugging me. Feels more mature and complete now.

And I would like thank Gregorian Masters of Chant for accompanying me tonight with this!

Edit ; July 23rd - Corrected some bits - minor details. But definitely sounds better now. These small bugs were really bothering me - lol


Special thanks to ~subjectdelta1964 for this piece [link] it perfectly refers to 2 parts of the story where the author is sitting on the main subject's lap

second memo : the second time this position is mentioned, i used the Kama Sutra's Transverse lute position which is quoted to be "Kiss and stroke each other—this position is part sex, part cuddle." I wanted to capture that tenderness in it.

Thirdly - this is the playlist that sort of ran in my mind when I mentally envisioned the second part

As the world falls down - David Bowie -

Take me to wonderland - Natalia Kills

Holding out for a hero - Bonnie Tyler

Bad Romance - Lady Gaga

When Our Hearts Collide - Little Boots

Nothing Else Matters - Metallica

Gore Baby Gore - Combichrist (the talking in the night scene)

Shrunken heads for all occasions - Combichrist (second time)

(The two Combichrist songs are actually super calm and relaxing, befitting the mood perfectly! They have absolutely NOTHING in common with the titles)

And lastly -- I presume you have guessed it but, just i case : in this specific case, rosebud refers to the clitoris but since i couldn't find a decent romantic term for it - i used a rough Hungarian translation of the general vaginal area.

Small rant : Romance have mercy on us, today's terms are IMPOSSIBLE to work with! Nevermind my struggle with pubic hair - I wanted to smash the Internet for being so retarded in the synonyms it gave me.
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JacquelineMonaie's avatar
AMAZING. That is simply the only adequate, and barely at that, word to describe this. I was enthralled. So moving, so vivid, so invoking of imagery and at the same time, not a moment of it was vulgar or explicit. I believe that you more than found the 'romance' which you sought. Even to the point that I pity our poor photographer her 8am shoot and the knowing looks she will have to bare all day!